Wednesday, March 24, 2010

You are not alone...


ಸ್ನೇಹಿತರೆ,
ಇಷ್ಟು ದಿನ ಕನ್ನಡ ಕವನ ಬರೆದೆ, ಅದಕ್ಕೆ ನಿಮ್ಮ ಪ್ರೋತ್ಸಾಹವೂ ಇತ್ತು, ಈದೀಗ  ಆಂಗ್ಲ ಭಾಷೆಯಲ್ಲಿ ಒಂದು ಕವನ ಬರೆದಿದ್ದೇನೆ, ಇದೊಂದು ಪ್ರಯೋಗ ಮಾತ್ರ ನಿಮ್ಮ ಅಭಿಪ್ರಾಯವೇ ನನಗೆ ಬರೆಯಲು ಸ್ಪೂರ್ತಿ, ''ಜೀವನದಲ್ಲಿ ನನಗೆ ಯಾರೂ ಇಲ್ಲ, ನಾನೊಬ್ಬ ಒಂಟಿ ಎಂಬ ಮನೋಭಾವನೆ ನಮಗೆ ಒಂದಿಲ್ಲೊಂದು ದಿನ, ಸಮಯದಲ್ಲಿ ಬರುತ್ತದೆ,ಅಂಥಹ ಸಮಯದಲ್ಲಿ ನಿನ್ನೊಂದಿಗೆ ನಾನಿದ್ದೇನೆ, ನನ್ನ ಪ್ರೀತಿಯಿದೆ, ನಿನ್ನ ಕಷ್ಟ ಸುಖದಲ್ಲಿ ಹೆಜ್ಜೆಯೊಂದಿಗೆ ಗೆಜ್ಜೆ ಕಟ್ಟಲು ನನ್ನ ಸ್ನೇಹವಿದೆ'' ಎಂಬುದರ  ಸಂಕೇತವೇ ಕವನಕ್ಕೆ ಪ್ರೇರಕ, ಪೂರಕ
Life is long
and am not so young
with the name of friend
spread the feel of joy, oh wind

You are not alone
always, you are mine
with the flower in your hand
give it to everyone, don't mind

Don't be a selfish
life is full of wish
with the goal in your hand
always smile, with kind

77 comments:

SANTOSH MS said...

Sir,

The theme is very good. A good and a brave attempt. Let you succeed in this path too.

Raghu said...

share your smile..share your feeling..friends are life..! nice poem sir.
Raaghu

Creativity!! said...

Beautiful Touching Lines.....Excellent Write Up :)

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Santhosh,
thanks for the comments

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Raghu,

yes freindship is precious diamond,

thanks for the comments

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Creativity,

thank you for the comments

Jayashree said...

Good try. Thoughts about friendship are beautiful.

Dr.D.T.KrishnaMurthy said...

offer a flower ,offer a smile,offer a helping hand.in offering you are offered.A nice poem sir.keep penning.

Ranjita said...

Cute one guru anna :)

World is beautiful(Gopal) said...

"Life is long
and am not so young",these two lines are so fascinating...It is too good. Keep moving on ur track ,surely u will rock in ur own style.....

ಸೀತಾರಾಮ. ಕೆ. said...

Nice attempt. Keep going.
"you are not alone always" would have been "you are always not alone"


"smile with kind" Excellent line

ಸಾಗರಿ.. said...

Although this is your first attempt, the poem is Really very nice. Reading English literature wil increase your style and affects your feelings too. We first think in kannada and transating it to english later(in mind) is not that much deep... don't mind please. I liked your poem

ಮನಮುಕ್ತಾ said...

nice poem.

ಜ್ಯೋತಿ ಶೀಗೆಪಾಲ್ said...

superb guru... kannadakkinta chennagide....

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Jayashree thank you

yes, freindship is always pleasurable

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Dr.D.T.Krishnamurthy

you are absolutely right, life is too short, we have to make it cute and smart.

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Ranjita,
thanks for the comments,

keep visiting

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Dear Gopal sir,

thanks for your wonderful comment,

I am so happy that you people liked it.

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Seetaaram sir

the line which you mention is also right. Your advice is always helpful to improve further.

Thank you sir

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Sagari you are absolutely right,

thats how we are doing when we are writing poems. I completely agree with you.
Thanks for your comments and advice

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Manamukta,

thanks for the comments

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Jyothi,

thank you, i am so happy

AshKuku said...

Lovely!!!! Meaningful & good....

Ash....
(http://asha-oceanichope.blogspot.com/)

ಸವಿಗನಸು said...

Dear Guru,

Good attempt....

Keep writing....

All the Best....

ಗುರು-ದೆಸೆ !! said...

'ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ ' ಅವ್ರೆ..,

ಆರಂಭ ಚೆನ್ನಾಗೆ ಆಗಿದೆ ಶುಭವಾಗಲಿ...
ಇನ್ಮುಂದೆ ಆಂಗ್ಲದಲ್ಲಿ ಬರೆಯುವೆ ಎಂದಿದ್ದೀರಿ!!?,ಕನ್ನಡದಲ್ಲಿಯೂ ಬರೆಯಿರಿ..

ನನ್ನ 'ಮನಸಿನಮನೆ'ಗೊಮ್ಮೆ ಬನ್ನಿ: http://manasinamane.blogspot.com

PARAANJAPE K.N. said...

very good,the lines are rhyming and fascinating too.

Harsha said...

endearing....

Harsha said...

Endearing....

yogish said...

very impressive...

VENU VINOD said...

Life is long
and am not so young


these lines i liked very much Guru...keep going..

ದಿನಕರ ಮೊಗೇರ.. said...

ಹ್ಹಾ... ಹ್ಹಾ ಎಲ್ಲರೂ ಇಂಗ್ಲಿಷ್ ನಲ್ಲೆ ಕಾಮೆಂಟ್ ಬರೆದಿದ್ದಾರೆ..... ತುಂಬಾ ಚೆನ್ನಾಗಿದೆ ಸರ್...... ಇನ್ನೂ ಬರಲಿ ಆಂಗ್ಲ ಗೀತೆ.....

shivu.k said...

ಗುರುಮೂರ್ತಿ ಹೆಗಡೆ ಸರ್,

ಸರಳವಾಗಿ ಬರೆದಿರುವ ಆಂಗ್ಲ ಭಾಷೆಯ ಕವನ ಚೆನ್ನಾಗಿದೆ.

सृजन said...

Hi guru,

Very pretty words, touching rather!!
I felt really up after reading this. A beutiful expression of friendship and thanks for writing in English, this is ur first creation I could read. Must say u r wonderful architect of words..
Swarnima

sunaath said...

Gurumurti,
Congratulations on your simple but beautiful poem. Please carry on.

ವನಿತಾ / Vanitha said...

Very nice attempt Gurumurthy:)
liked these very much -"Don't be a selfish, life is full of wish
with the goal in your hand
always smile"...

ತೇಜಸ್ವಿನಿ ಹೆಗಡೆ said...

Simple & Sweet Poem :)

abhilash said...

Nice poem. doesn't look like its first attempt in English.

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Ashkuku,

thanks for your comments,
keep coming

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Saviganasu

thanks for your inspirational words,
keep visiting

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

ಗುರು ದೆಸೆ,
ಅಂಗ್ಲ ಭಾಷೆ ಯಲ್ಲಿ ಪ್ರಯತ್ನಿಸಿದೆ,
ಕನ್ನಡ ಬ್ಲಾಗ್ ನಲ್ಲಿ ಎಂದೆಂದಿಗೂ ಕನ್ನಡವೇ
ನಿಮ್ಮ ಪ್ರೀತಿ ಪ್ರೋತ್ಸಾಹ ಇರಲಿ

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Paranjape sir

thanks for encouraging me.

It made me to write one more poem.

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Harsha,

thank you

keep coming

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Yogish

i am honoured

Keep visiting

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Venu

i am so happy that you people liked it

thanks for the comment

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

ದಿನಕರ್ ಸರ್
ನಿಮ್ಮ ಅಭಿಪ್ರಾಯಕ್ಕೆ ಧನ್ಯವಾದಗಳು
ಹೀಗೆ ಬರ್ತಾ ಇರಿ

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

ಶಿವೂ ಸರ್
ನಿಮ್ಮ ಪ್ರೀತಿ, ಪ್ರೋತ್ಸಾಹ ಹೀಗೆಯೇ ಇರಲಿ

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Dear Swarnima

thanks for your comment,

I hope i will able to pendown few more.

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Sunaath sir

thanks for the encouraging words,

surely will continue

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Vanitha,

even those lines fascinated me very much

life should be like that right.

thanks for the comments

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Tejaswini,

thank you for your words,

keep visiting

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Abhilash,

i am so happy about your comment

will try to improve in my next poem

Thanks for the comments

jithendra hindumane said...

A good begining and so meaningful....

shridhar said...

Friendship is forever ...

Small but sweat and meaning full poetry ..

Liked it :) ..

Rashmi said...

Very nice. Too good, cant make out that it is the first one. I liked the line 'spread the feel of joy, oh wind'

Keep writing and I will keep reading.

Rashmi said...

Too good. Impossible to believe that this is your first one. Especially the line 'spread the feel of joy, oh wind' made my day.

Keep writing

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Jitendra,

thanks for the encouragement

keep coming

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Shridhar,

short is always sweet na

thanks for the comments

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Rashmi

your encouraging word made me to write few more English Poems :)

thanks for the comments

ಗುರುಪ್ರಸಾದ್, ಶೃಂಗೇರಿ., said...

ಪ್ರಾಸಬದ್ಧವಾಗಿ ಬರೆದಿದ್ದೀರಿ ಚೆನ್ನಾಗಿದೆ ಇಷ್ಟವಾಯಿತು. ಪ್ರೋತ್ಸಾಹ ಜಾಸ್ತಿ ಸಿಕ್ತು ಅಂತ ಕನ್ನಡ ಬಿಟ್ಟುಬಿಡಬೇಡಿ ಸಾ..ರ್, ಓದೋಕೆ ನಾವೆಲ್ಲ ಇದ್ದೇವೆ.

ಗುರುಪ್ರಸಾದ್, ಶೃಂಗೇರಿ., said...

ಪ್ರಾಸಬದ್ಧವಾಗಿ ಚೆನ್ನಾಗಿ ಬರೆದಿದ್ದೀರಿ,ಇಷ್ಟವಾಯಿತು. ಜಾಸ್ತಿ ಪ್ರೋತ್ಸಾಹ ಸಿಕ್ಕಿತು ಅಂತ ಕನ್ನ ಬರೆಯೋದು ಬಿಟ್ಟುಬಿಡಬೇಡಿ ಸಾ....ರ್..,

ವಿ.ಆರ್.ಭಟ್ said...

one can realise its meaning is long
it goes into deep wide wide and so long
you can continue to write what you mean
Let Mother Kannada be always in is our jean

nice aggressive attempt, thanks

AntharangadaMaathugalu said...

ಡಾ ಗುರು ಸಾರ್...
ಶುಭಾರಂಭವಾಗಿದೆ.... ಪೂರ್ಣತೆಯನ್ನು ಪಡೆವತ್ತ ಸಾಗಲಿ ನಿಮ್ಮ ಆಂಗ್ಲ ಕವನಗಳ ಪಯಣ....

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

ಗುರುಪ್ರಸಾದ್ ಸರ್
ನಿಮ್ಮ ಅಭಿಪ್ರಾಯಕ್ಕೆ ಥ್ಯಾಂಕ್ಸ್,
ಖಂಡಿತ ಇಲ್ಲ, ಕನ್ನಡದ ಪ್ರೇಮ ಯಾವತ್ತೂ ಇರತ್ತೆ
ಇದೊಂದು ಪ್ರಯತ್ನ ಮಾತ್ರ
ಹೀಗೆ ಬರ್ತಾ ಇರಿ

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

V.R.Bhat Sir

thanks for your wonderful comments with small poem.
Kannada is always in our heart.
Keep visiting

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

ಅಂತರಂಗದ ಮಾತುಗಳು
ನಿಮ್ಮ ಪ್ರೋತ್ಸಾಹ ಪ್ರೀತಿ ಸದಾ ಇರಲಿ

ಸುಧೇಶ್ ಶೆಟ್ಟಿ said...

Nice :)

english nallu kavanavannu chennagi barediddeeri neevu...

Ramesha said...

Firstly, I apologise for being so late to put across my comments..

Its really a good attempt and the resulting poem is very impressive... This is an example that the thoughts can be translated into any language as long as you carry thoughts like the one here... commendable work... Keep writing Guru...

And also thanks so much for being so punctual in leaving your comments on my works :) Pls do keep dropping in and I will honestly try to pull your attention towards my blog thru my writings :)

Inspiration said...

Nice poem! appreciate the simplistic style, and nice to see that ur not forcing it to rhyme :).

Also, agree with u..'give to everyone'. You never know who would turn out to be a good friend!
Keep writing..language no bar :)! Good day!

Raghavendra Hegde said...

Nice poem sir....

Snow White said...

tumba chennagide guru sir :) :) tumba ista aithu :)

tadavaagi bandidakke kshame irali :)

suma

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Dear Sudhesh

tumbaa thanks

heege bartaa iri

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Dear Ramesha Sir

thanks for your wonderful encouraging comments. It made me to write few more like this.

Surely will visit your blog.

Keep visiting here too

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Dear Inspiration,

you are right,

language is only a bridge to connect people.

Thanks for your comments

Keep visiting

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Dear Raghavendra Sir

thank you sir for the comments

ಸಾಗರದಾಚೆಯ ಇಂಚರ said...

Dear Snow White,

heege bartaa iri, odta iri,

nammannu protsaahisutta iri

pandomatti naveena said...

hello sir this is navvena g s j from ventura... i am very happy to see you with multi dyanimic personality,,, wish u all the best

pandomatti naveena said...

hello sir this is navvena g s j from ventura... i am very happy to see you with multi dyanimic personality,,, wish u all the best